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LP pilot 6

12th Oct 2016, 3:12 AM
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LP pilot 6
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Seanimusprime98 12th Oct 2016, 3:12 AM edit delete
Seanimusprime98
The final strip of this Pilot episode. Please Please let me know what you guys think, do you guys like it or does it need improvement. Keep in mind this is just to test her abilities in battle but anyway, Thank you guys. This has been......Lady Puissant.

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SkepticalDemon 12th Oct 2016, 5:17 AM edit delete reply
SkepticalDemon
I've done comics in just pencil before and it can be hard to manage. I'd recommend going the images over in pen. :) And use digital text if you can, it's easier to read. Other than that I like the aesthetic and the vibe so far. Kind of has a miraculous ladybug feeling to it. Keep up the good work. :)
Guest 18th Oct 2016, 6:08 PM edit delete reply
Thank you very much for the feedback, I'll keep the pen and digital text in mind :)
Aran_Froggatt 28th Oct 2016, 6:20 AM edit delete reply
Aran_Froggatt
I'm liking this, Sean. Looking forward to more! It's got a cool old-fashioned superhero vibe.
artemisia8989 28th Oct 2016, 9:59 AM edit delete reply
artemisia8989
Hey, Sean! Here's my feedback! I like the atmosphere of your comic and I see you definitely have ideas. THe action scenes are not bad either. The problem is mostly with the text. It's a bit confusing and hard to read. ALso, the images need a little bit more definition: they look a bit... crowded? I'm not sure how else can I explain this...
Anyway, keep going! It's interesting.